Black Poetry : Minds Civil Unrest Prt.1(When Thoughts Trap U)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, May 21, 2005.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Car crashings
    Gangs fight
    Uncontrolable rioting
    Guns firing
    Baricaided
    Hopelessly shackled
    Abandoned
    Trapped betweem 4 walls like a psycho
    Confused
    Insane
    Im my own mystery
    A rat dropped in a maze
    Feelings this world gives to me
    Passive
    Affraid
    Yet
    Aggrivated
    Angry
    Distrought in a sense
    My own mind hangs me
    Misguided
    Yet running
    No where to go
    No nights with rest
    Keeping my sanity
    The real test
    Distant
    With no Distance
    Secluded
    Silenced
    Crippled in the brain
    Confused,
    So
    Violent
    No leave
    Listen
    But
    Quit metling
    Twisted emotion
    Good or Bad?
    never settling
    Decision
    Decision
    Life's crooked game
    Miserable
    Searching for happiness
    The rope gets tighter around my brain
    Looking for exits
    No where to go
    All roads are close
    Bolted locks on the door
    Tired
    Baffled
    How could this be
    Thinking to much
    Deadly
    Seems that my thoughts have trapped me!

    Lj
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rambling thoughts can make your mind seem trapped as one thought feeds into the next. I liked how the words flowed and drew us into the madness. Flow on brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa this go down deep i like how it was written
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read
    much appreciated
     
  5. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boy, do i know the feeling, i love this piece, this one goes down in the books for me :jam: :jam:
     
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    Hi THEONE
    This is an Extraordinary piece to me
    because ..my goodness
    We all at time get caught
    in the impact
    of the Thought Trap while Looking for that Freeway
    Astonishing drop
    Flow on

    Peace
     
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