Black Poetry : mindraped (an epic)

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  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my mind drifts sometimes
    when it's unstable.
    i'm unable to recollect thought
    but images of u make me distraught
    (when i know i was taught betta)
    my forces seem unpenetrable.
    but vulnerable is my middle name
    and luv tumors cause my heart
    murmurs to multiply-
    i slowly die-
    and all i can remember is nothing.
    flirting with death/cherishing wealth/my health
    rececitates, breaking my spirit.
    for my sake , i hope u won't hear it
    i hope your ears can't invite the
    murky tune of my demise
    because all was done out of luv for u
    i shrug for u because it all makes
    no sense
    i try to rinse away the problems, but
    the water's contaminated with your essence
    which makes matters worse
    and me fall for u harder
    not using the smarter side of my brain
    trying to refrain from indications of
    want/need/hate u syndromes.
    forever your grips are etched on
    a palette of my life-
    no allowance for a regular wife and kids
    causing my way of living to be virtually stalemate
    cornered by four walls-
    successfully mindraped
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when your mind is turned inside out by an invited guest, you can feel all dat. FROM ONE WHO KNOWS...so, you know i be feeling dis.

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    Yo Hi-wa!

    This is an epic that brings things back to my rememberance!!
    I feel ya! Life has not always been Peachy!! Ya Know!! I dig this Flo Fa Sho!!:toast:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa (ex Ga_Boi)


    altho' i'm not speakin' to you... i had to stop & let
    you know... (sangin') "you got it. you got it bad!!" :D

    it was tight doe... you know dat... don't trip!!

    :tongue:
    Elayne
     
  5. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx to all poets who took time and stopped by the side of the hi-wa to read this one . . .

    juanluv,
    hw
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa,

    Kewl read bro!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller-
    glad u could flo wit this piece. come back bye anytime.

    'shad-
    thank u too for your stop on the ride. 'preciate all the words of encouragement.

    . . . and as for you GA lady, glad you found time in yo bizzy skedule to drop by- i don't have it bad......just some off top stuff to get me back into writing and outta the blok, ya know. holla at me via IM.
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,
    thanx fa' readin bro.

    hw
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    love and uncertainty
    what i combination poet

    feeling ya question
    the mind shock
    especially this part:

    trying to refrain from indications of
    want/need/hate u syndromes.

    peace
    been there

    feeling ya poet
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'preciate that "poet'uvda month". thanx fa searchin beyond the surface of the words. congrats, and holla back.
     
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