Black Poetry : mind your own business

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Jul 16, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    girlfriend keep telling me
    girl u should leave him
    he don't love u
    don't believe him

    dude keep saying that
    he know the game
    my man lying to me
    but dude want my panties okay?

    im at the point where
    i have had enough
    folk all up i mine
    when they own shat fugged up

    so you can't tell me
    what to do or say
    how to act or behave
    shut your fuggin mouf okay?

    cause when i am lonely
    and my nights are cold
    you'll be the same one
    tryna make ur shat work

    and laffin at me
    cause i listened to you
    keep your punk arse advice
    im cool, cool, cool,
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey MORE
    Hearing you
    and feeling this
    Peace
     
  3. Khasm13

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    could not have said it better myself...
    on point...
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tru, tru, I know a few i could say this too :)
    nice scribe
    words so tru but rarely taken through :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MORE, OMG.....you musta been in my mind for a second, fumbling around for the light switch....LOL I love this flow:) :) :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    say it like it tis .............
    well felt sistah
     
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