Black Poetry : Mind Waves

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oceans and seas of tidal
    Wave breezes of love
    No longer distant shores
    As I feel you next to me
    Oh, yes...I, looking at you,
    As I search for a greater
    Depth of hues in the
    Essence of you
    How deep can I take you?
    Is your heart anchored?
    How can I move you to
    Tranquility?
    I ask you questions like
    This you see, to see if I
    Have the ability to bring
    Out of you the sweet gift
    Of serenity
    Subliminal rapture is what
    I feel when I am close to
    you
    I hear you whisper something
    So soft, yet so deep, that
    Only my body can hear....
    I feel you trying to massage
    My mind waves as I feast
    On relaxation with you
    Sensuous are we, as we
    Knead each others' souls
    But let me take this a
    Little further to a place where
    You can only understand, as
    I take you to a level that
    Only your mind will be able to
    Be freed
    You know, kind of like
    Hypnotical mind waves of
    Trances...let me take you there
    We penetrate off of moonlight
    Oceans as we drift
    Rain thoughts of gentle breezes
    With you brings me to climatic
    Heights of the unknown
    Radiant are we, ancient mind
    Waves of oceans and seas
    As we meditate on the idea
    Of "we", close your eyes and
    Repeat after me....
    I love you...I hear you say,
    "I love you"
    I need you...I hear you say,
    "I need you"
    I want you...I hear you say,
    "I want you"
    Forever...and I hear you say,
    "For eternity"
    Limitless as our mind waves
    Intertwine
    My muse is your mental
    Oh, and by the way, my work
    Is done...ahhh, the sweet
    Gift of serenity


    ~~~massaginthemindwitsensuosity~~~

    kaslis, copyright 2001...all rights reserved.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dear sweet friend... you have certainly earned

    the name "Lady Of Love Poetry"... & this one

    further proves it... I loved it!! thanks for sharing.

    NothinButLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UMMMMMMM!!!!

    as the sea breeze brisk in land
    upon the wonder of faces
    my loveth vow i offer u
    by the waves of yo love
    it floats into my soul
    and i feel ya essence
    now i desire the bliss
    yo sweet kiss
    as i taste passion
    YEAP!! ya work be done!!
    :heart: :love: :heart: :D
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, are you done...

    i found myself caught up in the rolls and rolls of hypnotic mind waves...gliding along the perfect picture painted so gracefully. THANK YOU.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i'm feeling these mind waves, girl

    i love mental sex

    loving your flow
     
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    Lister...

    Whew mami... this was beautiful!!! I hope you know that I was still checkin fa you in my absence. ima fan!

    All Love
    Reas
     
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    Lister haaaaaaaaay :wave:

    beautiful peace Sis

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet sunshyne, gurl, that makes me smile...thanks for your constant support, my dear friend.

    rich, loving the flow of your piece as i see the richness of your mind waves flow through you. I thank you for the read, as well.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller...smiles to you, dear poet. i thank you for reading me.

    so'ja...yeah, you know what i mean, ryght? ryght. thanks for the read.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reason, you have made me smile. you are one of my fans, as well, dear poet. i bet you didn't know that.?. i thank you for the read.

    destee, hey big sis, i thank you for the read, too.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
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