Black Poetry : MIND*vs*THOUGHT .............haiku

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Not long ago
    on my table
    we break bread
    together
    now today we
    FIGHT !
     
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    NICELY WRITTEN!

    VERY INTRIGUING BIT OF WORK!
    Excellent phrasing!
    Content superbly written yet sad also!
     
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    yes ladies

    it's a shame one fight after just being friends
    thankz
     
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    Re: yes ladies

    Be not dismayed by
    what is displayed
    my thoughts have not strayed
    they stayed!
     
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    well now

    good news
    news i can use...
     
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