Black Poetry : Mind Trippin Destee Style

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The wonder of words...
    Rhyme schemes can take
    us on unexpected journeys.
    It's a trek only the mind can take.
    Want an inviting scribe
    with an ocean view?
    The Blue in the Water
    will surely immerse you.
    Desire a romantic tryst in flight?
    Words, Rich with passion, will
    soar you through the night.
    Prefer a scribe with wisdom
    and picturesque images galore?
    Angelic visions and Sage advice
    will make you say, encore!
    Want to raise your
    fist in pride?
    A Positive Mind will Set you
    on a freedom ride.
    So many possible destinations
    you'll find
    depending on
    your state of mind.
    Choose wisely, you may end up
    somewhere unexpected......
    Where will the poets take you today?
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    tyte peace....
    and sho nuff true....
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you enjoyed this Khasm, thanks for letting me know.
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm addicted 2 the mind trips & dream about taking the next...
    and the next...
    and the next...

    Tight piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very sweetly done and well crafted
    da gift u pose is awesome love it
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a pleasant addiction it is to have, huh Positive? Thank you.
    Awesome? You humble me, Rich. Glad you liked it so, thanks.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    INDEED I LOVE DIS HERE
     
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    love the originality
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you gempis, for enjoying the way I put this together.
     
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    i am smiling..my goodness sister this is amazing...wonderful flow...creative indeed..much love on this scribe..Mind Tripping :)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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