Black Poetry : MIND STATE

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  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its so clear dat im no where
    a place they tell people not 2 go there
    r u brave enough 2 come?
    oh yea u show fear
    knowin u got ya soul here
    wot makes u stronger me im at a place dat got hope scared
    cold tears got me actin so weird
    cuz ive been 2 da known edge so many times dat sometimes i have no cares
    i lock my pain inside i dont share
    im at a place where nobody saves da day
    im stuck with no where else 2 go cuz nobody made a way
    im at a place where no heroes can be found
    no kings,no crowns
    a place so lo u cant fall
    so forget about standin tall
    its a place no one calls
    dat place is somethin y'all
    no dat place is nuttin at all
    that place is my mind state
    and im afraid 2 let anybody in
    cuz they might not understand or relate.


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    Scary it seems to enter a place that's difficult to climb out of. But, we've all been there, within our own minds, our own worlds. Not easy to invite someone into to that which may not be misunderstood. I really like pieces that make me think a bit deeper.
     
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    sometime we find ourselves in this place reaching searching to get out
    of this mental and own world u took me inside a bit tyte drop poet !
     
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    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks 4 the replies is well appreciated.
     
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    TYTE DROP rapchild I LIKES
    KEEP IT UP SUGA!!
    SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
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    That was deep.
    I feel where u coming from.
     
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    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u.
    for the da feed bak....
    n even though i share n know y'all go thru stuff like dat i think nobody still understands but its all good
     
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    yea

    i not scared of your mental state

    lol

    i can take it there too.

    haha

    feeling you poet
    i'm feeling you
     
  9. rapchild

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    lol aight man thanks
    peace
     
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    re:Mind

    Scary write of pain.
     
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