Black Poetry : Mind Sex

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Luver2B, May 12, 2004.

  1. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    It's like a song that only you can hear
    Just like red lips pressing at your frontier
    Faucets turned on upstairs
    Just to wet your downstairs
    Words displayed at your gate
    Acknowledged like good taste
    Knowledge dropped from the dome
    Hypnotized like rim's chrome
    Vibration of your drum
    Makes you hot like sweet rum
    While news from my sensors
    Hit your mind’s receptors
    Your start to wonder if I knew your past
    Am I the one who will free you at last
    Will I bring your body out of anonymity
    Do I have all the tools to dig your symmetry
    Can I be
    Will I see
    All things you've been afraid to state
    All the sweet crevasses your ex forgot to taste
    All the sweaty sheets you never felt in place
    All the naughty faces you’ve wanted to face
    All of your body being touched at right pace
    Mind sex
    Right sex
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great sex.........nice drop
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Man Mind Sex...that's my jam and you did it just right.
    I like this piece foreal,not just cuz it's number one on a lot of my mix cds:lol:
    But yes yes you did it:wave:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you brought that in...keep scribing, you're doing a good job.
     
  5. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love ya'll, this is good stuff.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like someone is going to be taken through a rapture, nice drop here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da heat is on now !!!
     
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    reminds me of Dead Prez...It's time for some mind sex, we don't have to take our clothes off yet....That's the whip.


    Nice verse...I'm feeling this one.
     
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