Quiet Poetry Lounge : Mind of Hearts Whisper to My Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Feb 28, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thought it could never be
    But I am here in the flesh
    Living…..

    At times I feel as if we
    only live in your world
    not knowing of another
    you have me twisted up
    head ova heels
    spinning and dancing
    held in a embrace
    I wont release…..
    do you know?
    can you feel?
    Your heart speaks to
    me in so many ways
    as your vibes run through
    the air…….
    so free and uplifting….
    As we walk this road….
    Hand n hand…..
    Just
    Tryin to…..
    Find the pleasure …
    As you release a once dark soul
    To heavens eyes
    my tears pour
    I come go with you
    Above and low
    You’re my love….
    See I don’t know where
    this will take me
    But I know the feeling
    And I wont let go
    As I take this road
    Hand n hand we disappear
    into your world….

    so do it mean its my turn now????
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' wow the way this
    creeped in and stolen
    a piece of me
    yeap it's ya turn indeed !!!!

    this was a powerful heart felt scribe
    of inner deep emotions speaking
    let it run like da river.....
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you think so???

    glad you enjoyed this as
    much as i had fun
    thinking on it as i wrote
    mmmmmmm a piece of you
    that sounds good lol
    i know its out there
    i feel the embrace
    of the hold it have :love:

    thanks for all the love on dis .......Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' most welcome within
    the depth of it was str8
    awesome keep flowin
     
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    lovely poem sis
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A vibe can take us so many places. Keep this sweet flow going.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich glad ya feel it indeed thanks again
    loving your support on dis....
    thanks sister blue...always showing love
    and support to me thanks....it means alot
    a vibe shoot i be living this one watz...
    thanks fo stopin by....
    Peace yall Angel
     
  8. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think that was a great poem
    very creative
    I liked it a lot
     
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