Black Poetry : mind movements or throusand thoughts - part 1

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  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    dont let words take the place of a smile
    look...touch the heart
    It's always nicer seeing you!
    *
    skirting between two worlds
    walking the edge of time
    drifting back and forth in space
    hiding
    **
    we are here to create, recreate and
    recreate again
    what we have created
    ***
    in the moment that time exists
    a throusand thoughts...eternity
    ****
    people wanting to talk
    fearful
    afraid to see freedom
    sadness
    *****
    suspecting others
    because
    you are afraid that you
    are
    ******
    LANGSTON HUGHES
    what is in the soul he has seen
    bop..hey, hey, hi Re-bam LORD
    it takes one who is to know
    *******
    one must do what one must do
    one must be what one is
    for it one does what one must
    one can never hurt one
    *
    even that is a lie
    who ever heard of any one
    having all their ###t together
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all my my my !!!
    this was mind moving and deep thinking
    pt.2 please wow!
     
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    word....you ended part one with a bang....
    waiting for the others.....
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like
    cus I have been it tht limited frame of mind at times
    when I stop producing and start questioning
    even the supposed wicked create
    so what for those who know truth
    you give to me and also receive
    Love is eternity as is existence
    but how are we living in these thoughts
    I'm sure part 2 is gooin to be hot
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :oops: one having all their :poop: together? LOL not all of it!

    :golf: Great drop sis! :teach:
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you can spend l0 minutes
    figuring out what the smilies mean
    ..

    meantime i thank you
    rich, khasm,realeyezrealize
    and camelpython i could have
    used the smilie huh?
    sometimes i am slow...
    thanks...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, we change, we rearrange, to our own tastes, preferences, and yes in the end, it still isn't perfect. If we're lucky it appeals to us, and resonates with others. This is beyond, the beyond.....
     
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