Black Poetry : MIND KILLAHZ (pt.3 of the Mind Freak trilogy)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gucci was on the name on everyone's lips
    and Chanel was nestled in the
    cracks of everyone "brains"
    talkin to the weed man across the street,
    "can i get a dime bag?"
    10 dollaz brotha,
    10 dollaz to sell ur soul,
    and leave ur heart cold,
    sinking into the winter snow...

    the cumulus clouds flowed
    through some childs existence
    that would look to them to answer
    some unhead prayer by a GOD not really there...

    Mr. Greed and Mrz. Ignorant
    were playing paddycake on day
    trying to devise a plan to take ova
    the world.....

    i stuck by the man who's
    history is soiled by child molestation
    murdering someone....

    RELIGOUS LEADERS SPEAKING
    OVER PODIUMS ANOUNCING THAT
    THERE WAY IS THE ONLY WAY
    OR ELSE U ALL GO TO HELL....

    what?
    i thought hell was here...
    on earth....
    hmmmm....

    what could be worst...
    then a crackhead
    crawling through the streets
    feinin for there only "satisfaction"?

    hmph...The mind killaz....

    copywrite 2004, all rights reserved...
     
  2. ki-ki2004

    ki-ki2004 Active Member MEMBER

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    *mmmph! mmph! mmmph!*

    You are one truly talented young lady. Capturing all that! I love it. Love it. Love it. :)*
     
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    yes dear sister
    wonderful drop
    surly enjoying your flows :)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sistah blue, and brotha kiki,
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok, ok, ok, ok.....yeah....mind Killaz....yeah - you pegged this one...
    reads like a story the whole Trilogy, oh - lol
    I guess that's why you the STORY

    no doubt...that's wassup 4 sho!

    2fish
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall,
    :heart:
    -stort
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the_story..... u are putting it down
    love this 4real
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a head shaker for sure. Keep penning the truth.
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im glad u feel me...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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