Quiet Poetry Lounge : Mind Gazing...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Nov 4, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you really handle the truth?
    Can you truly deal with my love?
    Can YOU stand to be taken for a flight
    for a change, to the stars above?
    I'm not sure if you can take the depths of this
    romance, flying you beyond the stratosphere
    You are safe upon my magic carpet, just
    lay back and relax my dear
    Observe the stars, take in the planets,
    just absorb the atmosphere
    I'm taking you mind gazing darling
    take a trek inside my mind
    You won't find any confusion
    just the answers you've been aching to find
    Sometimes what seems too good
    to be true, really is not
    Just a matter of accepting your destiny
    and thanking God for what you've got
    The truth is just as real as
    the stars and planets on high
    but it remains beyond your reach
    So, when you start wondering why
    just look to the sky
    and enter my mind's eye

    Mind gazing....
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Watz...I accepted ya invite and took a journey within ya mind....Kinda freaky...lol..Naw, u have a beautiful mind, sista...I enjoyed my trip...Thanx...

    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mind blowin gazing deep
    if one can handle it then it will
    be a victory march inward .....
     
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    It's amazing how we can sometimes see, what they see not. If you're the Queen of the earth, you can surely take him on that heavenly ride, that one would never want to leave.
    I like this piece, I'd like to take that trip with that special one as well....^5
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey bigdrizzle, I'm not responsible for the thoughts that lurk while I'm asleep, lol. Thank you for taking that trip brotha, and making me smile.
    It's amazing what one can handle when it's a road to bliss Rich, makes ya just want to pack your bags and fly. Thank you much.
    When we allow ourselves to see, sometimes the light hurts our eyes, cause they've been shielded for so long. Happy you liked this queent.
     
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    sometimes its the best thing to do let ya mind go on a trip ....i like this flow
    thanks for sharing...

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Isn't that the truth blkangel, isn't that the truth. Glad you liked this piece, thank you.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when you can get lost in another flow and take that trip....oh yes
    your welcome...Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some people's words can just do that to ya, yes, I know.... Thanks again blkangel.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the mind gazing flow, flow on watzinaname
     
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