Black Poetry : mind funk

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 11, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dream U
    the stars syne
    brytely upon U
    i envision U opening
    up the gateways to my
    soul...
    takin a stroll in my
    heartbeat,
    U creep silently
    in my rymetic beat,
    seeping deep...
    yeah......deep in to
    harmony sealed,
    revealed,
    disconnecting roots,
    that i thought were
    lost...but were'nt
    i feel U aginst cries,
    crysis, U exist alone
    in my solace....making
    melodys..felt to destecrate
    mi fears.....and dry hard
    blak tears...that have fallen
    through my years....



    this is from ya digggin deeeeeeppp, GODDESS, hope u enjoy ;)
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep n wholesome, fa sho!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    P.I.M.P

    :D THANKS GURL,FOR THE LOV THAT U HAVE SHOWN, IM LUVIN IT ON THE REAL.DESTEE IS LIKE A SECOND HOME IM HERE LIKE ALL THE TIME. ITS TYTE. REALLY I LOVE EVERYONE HERE, MY SISTER REGISTERED ON THE SAME DAY I DID(I REFERRED HER) WHICH HAS MADE IT EVEN BETTER! :grouphug:
     
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    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is funky and romantic
    i feel the harmony
    peace and nappiness
    one
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for comin through,just did this one,
    much luv:D
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooh... Very poetic peace! Sweet.
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx 1poet everything is everythings
     
  8. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is off the hook!!! I like it a lot!!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    props to this flow! l likes :wink:

    nfinite,,
    jh.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall, forgive me i havent been here in a while,mom and dads curfew, (deep sigh)....but im back again
     
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