Black Poetry : Mind Funk

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The edge
    Close
    To the Center
    Her heart
    I try to reach, yet always I miss the mark
    I’ve attempted to induce seduce reduce her towards desire
    Only to have it backfire against me
    Now she’s only interested in sensuality
    Some men might find this a good thing, but I am not the usual man
    I want her to love me
    Not just my hip/no/(poe)tic verbal persuasions
    Mental masturbation
    That soils undergarments
    Where She once said I’m sadistically torturous, but my goal is not to torment
    I’ve helped release her mind and body, but I keep missing her heart and soul
    Taught her a new way of finding control
    Over herself
    Inhibitions damned
    I wanted to be her man
    I wanted what we have to go passed the bedrooms
    Emotionally though I’m the only one consumed
    In the thoughts of her
    I would like to go beyond the point of being just lovers
    What we have is not so complex (yet it is difficult to measure)
    Question is, can it go beyond the need for sex? (without forsaking that pleasure)

    I revealed myself the sinner
    She became intrigued
    She’s not the innocent type but she is more innocent than me.
    My blunder,bungling, mistake, err
    Mind Funk whispers


    How? you ask could I seduce her
    Me 40 pounds overweight, missing some teeth, I aint no looker.
    Enticing Mind Funk Whispers

    Listen to how I once whispered to her

    “Come here close your eyes I got something for you
    No, come closer, it’s something for your ears and mind too
    Here take this in your hands
    Do you know what you’re feeling?

    Deep Dark Red Mango
    Brought up
    Caribbean in origin
    Hold firmly
    Let me unsheathe my knife
    My saber blade razor sharpened
    To cut slowly
    Deliberately pealing skin
    Exposing caramel like sugary elixir
    Wait you must not eat yet
    Mmm can’t you smell it?
    The aroma envelops the air like a deep ocean does a ship
    Oh I see the waters on the borders of your lips
    Succulent sensations your awaiting
    Scintillating, a tease to tastebuds
    Tender delicate meat exposed
    What Was that a spasm for desire?
    As the sweet juices spill to your hands
    Your mouth can’t resist
    Go ahead now it’s all right for you to devour
    No need for etiquette
    Go on go ahead,
    Swallow it’s nectars
    Devour it’s flesh
    I know you can no longer fight your passions
    When the juices flow pass lips to neck
    To breast
    I will willingly bathe you clean
    As cat cleans her kitten, a tongue lashing baptism
    Till the juices are fully gone and you are left fully satisfied

    Go ahead…Now you tell me could you be a seduced by a little mind funk whisper?

    Nahshon-Rae
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well posed poet!!
    da depth has me in awe....
     
  3. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $Rich$
     
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    This is a really nice piece, I am mos def digging the ending, my my


    am
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes I can! ..."be seduced by a little mind funk." Love the title and "mental masterbation" had me. Nice write.
     
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    to hot to trott.... to hot
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhh yeah my mind got funked up on this here. I'm probably last as all get out but welcome to the house.


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    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess you all like it hot...
     
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    i know it do :blush::hot: this is it!!!
     
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    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just a reminder
     
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