Black Poetry : mind candy (inspired by GA_Sunshyne)

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmone


    mind candy stirring colors in my dreams--
    like--
    jazz and hip-hop to the same drumline--
    remote realities--
    causing--
    acute insanity--
    because--
    your lips challenge me--
    inviting me to kiss my dreams--
    progressively--

    mind candy striking delusions in my mind--
    like--
    candelight you me and--
    canciones de amor--
    stunning the heart of me--
    loving wholeheartedly--
    stripping the art from me--
    becuase you are by far--
    the most aesthetic thing i see...

    mind candy
    be that--

    mind candy--
    becoming the nucleus of my exsistence--
    like--
    a revelation--
    before you...
    did I know what existing was?

    mind candy.

    be that.

    never change.


    (c)2001 PPS & Company

    espee.sean.greg.perk.
     
  2. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling ya dawg
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEANNNNN!!!

    with every poetic breath i possess...
    i am totally & irreversibly loving this peace!!

    do you know how beautiful you are to me??!!
    (you need to check my response to that
    raspberry peace you wrote too)... your words
    are always capturing & holding me until i
    get to the end of the poem... then i say to
    myself... "****!! i need to talk to him!" :)

    thanks for being inspired by me...

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tank ya love!

    thanks for the reply SUNshyne
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa...

    Man, you are so deep! Its just indescribable. I don't know how you do it, but you do it, very, well. You're on fire :hot:, pa; keep that up.
     
  6. GQ

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    Sean,

    Ya be da man!!! This inspired flow is burnt like that!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    sean....

    i would say this piece is tight BUT...that's already been said

    i would say this piece is :hot: but that's been said too

    SOOOO, i'll just say...this piece is banging

    but you already know that :D:

    scribe on poet...scribe on...
     
  8. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean,

    that...that there... was like, OFF THA HOOK!!
    loved it, loved it, loved it....

    8th!
     
  9. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th, D, GQ and Maple

    just glad to be of service to y'all

    (humbly bows and exits)

    sean.
     
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