Black Poetry : Mimicking your voice

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Aug 2, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am mimicking your voice to
    echo your sound
    off the inside of my mind
    so I can dance with
    the reverberations
    of your
    ...........sweet verbal flute harmony
    that makes the
    fields of joy sway
    and move around me
    ...........and I imagine
    that your arms are
    around me.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so sweet...

    S T O P and L I S T E N

    cease your mimicking to hear the

    sweetness of my voice in your ear


    cease imagining as my arms embrace you

    can you feel me?

    I love this peace!!!
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLak-NeSs....


    ahhh... short&sweet... & still managing to move me. :)

    i see we're gonna have to talk more often!! :lol:
    seriously though... this was a delyghtful read.

    One.
    Ga~
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PEEP

    NICE AND SMOOTH KEEP IT UP ADD A LITTLE MORE FEELING INTO IT
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    smooth Blak

    almost in the form
    of an extensive
    haiku :)

    pd
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm late to say thanks but I do say thank you....thus

    THANK YOU

    blak
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm... so sweet

    reading you is like
    eating rich, sweet chocolate
    so i do it slow
    alone
    savoring every bite...
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  8. jelli

    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [​IMG] I like.....I like:D
     
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