Black Poetry : milwaulkee's dream

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Jun 11, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    walked into the club
    not looking for love
    just a friday night on the town

    stepped to the bar
    and there u were
    fresh and clean
    in front of me

    offered a drink for the lady
    i gladly obliged
    looked into your eyes
    suddenly, im mesmerized

    said you don't live here
    your from outta town
    but for a few days
    we can hang out

    we spoke of lost loves
    and politics and such
    then moved to the dance floor
    where i fell in love

    and normally i don't
    sit and be still
    i circulate the room
    preying on my next kill

    but my poise was stellar
    like a school girl trained
    as you went to the mens room
    in my seat i remained.

    end of the night
    we want the same thing
    invitation to your hotel room
    indicates to me a fling

    and since im in love
    and have grown in my ways
    i've learned to refrain
    the hootchie coochie must
    wait

    so we kissed good-nite
    and i went home alone
    by the next morinin
    call you on The phone

    its check out time
    and i know u must leave
    rushing to see you
    beggin my heart not to grieve

    the good bye hurt me so much
    my eyes held back tears
    couldn't handle the pressure
    its like i'd known u all my years

    i hated the fact
    we had to depart
    i hated the fact
    i had a heart

    i loved you so much
    in a matter of a day
    and felt my soul mate
    drifting away

    i look in the stars
    pinned up in the sky
    and know your somewhere
    and break down to cry

    if i cannot see you
    surely i will falter
    cause you are my soul mate
    see u at the alter.:( :love: :love: :love: :love:
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

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    I believe that
    Everyone we meet
    we must meet again
    At least
    No need to despair
    Because if he doesn't come
    I'LL always be there!!!

    MORE, you are a wonderfull poet
    Hope to hear more from you soon.

    Keep on keepin on!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

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    i'm lovin' this...great piece...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    alright flow head on MORE.....
    tyte scribe
     
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    I'm feelin this...:) nice piece
     
  6. MissPoetik

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    texas' dream...

    i can relate to this one... i went to texas for srping break and met this cool @ss guy and when it was time for me to go... i was sad. but, i aint even gonna lie... it just wasn't meant to be for us. anyway, i feel you though...
     
  7. Sierra

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    Hi MORE, :)

    I love this!! A very nice poem!! I can relate!!

    ~Sierra~:wave:
     
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