Black Poetry : Midnights' Daughter

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Oct 26, 2002.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 6, 2001
    Messages:
    1,443
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    business/management
    Location:
    maryland
    Ratings:
    +1
    If a woman is beautiful she may adorn herself in any hue
    And beauties resonance may originate from the soul to the frame
    Or the frame to the soul
    But with all else being equal
    Give me midnights’ daughter Forged of Onyx hue
    Her outer core has been polished to perfection
    With not a blemish misplaced

    To the touch she is unimaginably smooth and warm
    And as you hold her close and lay your head on her ample breast
    Or if you’re really lucky you will rest your brow
    on the perfectly crafted pillows she smuggles Around in those stretch jeans
    and by dawns early light
    you know that victories secrets may need to cover some girls
    but not
    midnights’ daughter
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 20, 2002
    Messages:
    601
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    lover of words.
    Location:
    jawja
    Ratings:
    +0
    shazzy.


    midnight's daughter, huh? ****! that's tyght...
    i wish i had thought of that before i changed my
    name to "elayne." :D thank you for appreciatin'
    us sisters of a darker hue. :)

    itsallLove, chile. (even tho' you in trouble)

    elayne.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,962
    Likes Received:
    3,980
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,183
    u really did dis one up here ......love the way u pose da hue
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 6, 2001
    Messages:
    1,443
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    business/management
    Location:
    maryland
    Ratings:
    +1
    elayne
    I must say I am very surprised
    i always had you pegged for one of them big fine
    "red bone women" (lol)
    thanks for the love

    $$Rich$$
    thanks for the view
    It's good to see that your getting back in the flow of things as you share you knowledge
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2001
    Messages:
    2,502
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    -----------
    Location:
    ------------
    Ratings:
    +1
    shaz

    i know for a fact i don't qualify for midnight's daughter. i'm a cousin of daybreak twice removed, but ahhh hell i love the way you put it down for my sistaz...




    One
     
  6. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 12, 2002
    Messages:
    875
    Likes Received:
    10
    Occupation:
    Recording artist and Business Man...so lets do it
    Location:
    Shaolin,New York
    Ratings:
    +10
    i must be lucky cuz i've rested my brow.........ga-night yall!!!!lol


    nice thread poet
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 6, 2001
    Messages:
    1,443
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    business/management
    Location:
    maryland
    Ratings:
    +1
    Ub
    thank you for the love and I hope all the sistahs of our hue know I still love them two

    LURK
    Glad to see other brothers have had the wisdom to fully appreciate the motherlands finest of perfectly crafted creations.
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,627
    Likes Received:
    31
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +32
    shaz,

    tight piece poet...you are definitely correct. 10


    blak
     
  9. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2001
    Messages:
    1,303
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    motherhood
    Location:
    maryland
    Ratings:
    +4
    you right about victoria's secret...
    she ain't neva fit right!!!
    lovely flow... -7:spinstar:
     
  10. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 6, 2001
    Messages:
    1,443
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    business/management
    Location:
    maryland
    Ratings:
    +1
    blak
    thanks for veiwing

    wildflower-7
    thank you for the love
    good to hear from you
     
Loading...