Quiet Poetry Lounge : Midnight Whispers!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the night comes
    and the days done...
    And I have done all
    the things I should have
    done...the night comes
    and I salute the passing
    of the sun, I await the
    newness of the moon!
    Midnight whisper's hello
    all the sky is a glow.
    Stars twinkle and I know!
    That...
    Midnight whispers are for you!
    As I watch the changing colors
    in the sky and I pray and I pledge
    to love you til I die...I hear the
    softest unseen gentle breeze
    so minute that it seems to slip
    through time with ease...
    and I rise from my knee's feeling
    lighter than that breeze!

    Midnight whispers are my homage
    to my God and my King...
    Proverbs and Psalms to him I sing.
    To you my beloved...I give voice
    to passion and define emotion
    I reinvent the sound of bliss...
    and I seal it with a pre-dawn
    kiss.

    As I watch the brilliant
    dark blues and in between hues
    give way to brilliant shades of
    orange and then yellow...I feel
    so mellow...when I think about
    you and I prepare to do all the
    things that I know I need to do.
    Until Midnight whispers again...
    I think of lunch with a friend!
    And how far in pilate class will
    I bend...all in preperation of my
    MIDNIGHT WHISPERS!
    BJS(c)2004
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so beautiful. Those celestrial images just takes me to another realm. And how are you msluciousb?
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooooh so pure and gorgeous. A real blessing. Thank you so much for your love.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How are ya doing?
    its nice to read you once more...

    very well done i was all in it my sista as always
    tight drop....

    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Y'all! I so appreciate it.

    Thanks for reading and responding, that makes picking it up again so much easier. I appreciate your support as always. Had a lil bout of clinical exhaustion
    dealing with my sick grandchild, you know sleep depravation, not eating right, moving to much. Finally God said enough, he made her well enough to go home for two whole weeks, she managed six days of school and she goes back in on
    Thursday the sixth. She is doing better, I am doing better, rested and ready for the world, But don't stop praying for us!
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very well done
    see ya pen and u are awesome
    flow on sistah
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a lovely flow my sister
    so sweet and tranquil:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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