Black Poetry : midnight snack (an rain poem)

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  1. Giovanni

    Giovanni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my boy and I coin'd a bunch of terms.. one of them is "rain poems"
    rain poems are erotic poems.. what happens when you stand in
    the rain? you get wet, don't you? well aight then, here's a "rain poem":

    my tongue
    parts thighs
    like knives---***** sliced
    wet, & warm, -juices slide
    outta brown fruit---I take to the head
    like cereal bowl/ palmin' crescent moons---
    collidin' below waistlines..

    face tight,

    between vice
    grip, -thighs that
    tie my tongue
    below nappy black laces.

    send you spiralin'
    with pink fire, that burn
    through you slow---inscence hips,

    balance the ****
    like flames---straddlin' candle wick
    when I lick you there &
    rearrange yuh pubic hairs,

    stimulate yuh hips---
    bouncin' like bass thump/
    face clutch'd tight,

    like---

    bike seat
    between *** cheeks,

    wedged between gappin' thighs
    that ride my face, along bikini line
    like barcode swipe.

    til' she wipes
    her ripe wet t(wo)u
    -lips all ova' my face, like
    mango discharge---thick & sticky,

    like envelope paste
    in humidity.

    mango juice, trailin'
    cheek bones/ soak'd
    like cow heel, in split peas
    ova' rice.

    cheek bones
    soak'd between moans
    in sighs, buried
    in erogenous zones,

    I punch the flames
    with my breath & jerk
    yuh rhythms,

    through pubic funk

    in pitch black
    silence, you scratch'd
    yuh sounds through..
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is spicey... thank you for articulating the rain! :hot: :hot:


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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    G.

    (ooooo... imma tell!!) :lol:
    there's a flash-flood warning in effect ova
    here today!! (LOL) this was hot to def! :)

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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