Black Poetry : midnight lovemaking...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Aug 12, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it seems we have completely
    forgotten all of our surroundings
    and l am being selfish
    not wanting
    your career and other indirect affairs to take another
    minute of your mental
    and l have that plus your steaming body on my to-do list
    and it is going to take all night
    as l take it slow
    your body under moonlight candle glow
    claiming divinity
    and demand for slow tempo
    clean and wet
    cd
    on repeat i sink myself to the bed of silk
    to massage your feet with with my hands
    wet with your sun-ripened
    rasperry lotion in slow motion doing every pretty toe
    as you moan in relaxation possible in meditation of what is to cum
    your body
    is calling for my lips, my kiss, my tongue as l sow wet kisses
    up your thighs surrendered slightly over my shoulders
    l kiss your breasts over and over
    l can not get enough of your heaven.....
    you...
    in the mode of making love are helpless...
    placing your hands behind the small of my back and then lower
    grabbing me
    holding me wanting me to interpret your language as l do it
    calmly
    entering
    you
    and it feels like pleasant waterfalls each stroke l take and sounds we make
    the dawn will not break tomorrow without this memory to take
    of how l made love to you in midnight...
     
  2. gayluv

    gayluv Active Member MEMBER

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    The ability

    The ability to express passion through words is a God-given gift that you have truly obtained.
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, your pen flows relentless these days...
    I loved this, this piece will conjure memories for many...
    "The CD on repeat" definitely......can relate

    captivated,
    angelic
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, your woman is lucky. That was hot. so deep, nearly spiritual.
     
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    this is :hot: i liked it alot.

    much love,
    -story
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..thanx family
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u work the words so well my brotha :)
     
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    oOoOoO
    this has been a :teach:

    ~*J'hiah Joint~*

    J'hiah this is so wild and so tyte :)
     
  9. Justerika

    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    I've had a night or two like this

    nice...
    JustE
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    you got em hooked son...lol
    they would love this on open mic night
    peace
    khasm
     
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