Black Poetry : Midnight Desperation...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is about my first love who died in a car accident....hope u enjoy it...


    midnight desperation...
    quiet anticipation...

    midnight
    layin'
    thoughts of you
    blatant
    reminiscing
    of the
    past images
    in the
    nights so full of
    passion

    wantin' you so
    desperately
    fallin' apart
    incoherently
    tryin' to drown
    these thoughts
    of you

    cryin'
    why'd you have to go
    dyin'?
    leavin me
    to miss you
    wantin' to
    feel and kiss you

    oh...****...baby...
    what the hell were you thinkin' to go there?
    when you had my heart? its no where near fair

    i'm completely messed up
    why the hell am i missin' you so much?
    this desperation drives me CRAZY
    can't eat
    can't sleep
    i'm dazin'

    i'm out
    into a dream
    of doubt
    i drown in fear
    while unsuccessfully holdin' back
    every tear

    eyes wide
    red brimmed
    swollen
    tears coincide
    then subside
    i'm so broken

    but then...

    i finally let my soul free
    i cry!
    i scream!
    i yell!
    i dream...
    of you...
    again...

    in this...

    deep...
    unbearable...
    desperation of you...
    tonight...
    in my bed
    at midnight...
     
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    So sad. The lost of a love one is always felt. sad but yet beautiful
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah its sad....i'm just now gettin' over it...thanks purplemoons...
     
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    My heart was soo into it....My mid was sad and my spirit wanted to go to heaven to pick your first love up!!!! But anyhow, I very happy that your getting over it Lovly. Does me good to know your feeelin better after reading this....By the way if i 4got to mention it: Excellent scribe sis
     
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    indeed so sadly said i feel u so much here
    i still have not gotten ova the most humble lost
    of my own ........the pain is deeper then any could ever know
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww thanks for ur kind words SwtT...i wish i could go to heaven and pick him up too...but God has blessed me with the love of my life now and for that i am forever grateful.....out of tragedy comes a blessing...and thats what happened to me...
     
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    yep the pain is very deep rich...but in time its subsides...prayer helps...
     
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    very sad conveyance of love lost
    Peace to ya, Poet!
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

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    yep...sad it is...
     
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