Black Poetry : ...Midnight Craving...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Nov 4, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ((12 o'clock))
    i want you
    ((12 o'clock))
    i need you
    ((12 o'clock))
    i want to
    ((at 12 o'clock))
    feel you
    ((12 o'clock))
    your all mine
    ((12 o'clock))
    at this time
    ((12 o'clock))
    don't rewind
    ((12 o'clock))
    or i'll decline
    ((12 o'clock))
    come kiss me
    ((12 o'clock))
    don't miss me
    ((12 o'clock))
    desire
    ((12 o'clock))
    my fire
    ((12 o'clock))
    feel my heat
    ((12 o'clock))
    in your seat
    ((12 o'clock))
    as i grind
    ((at 12 o'clock))
    on this ride
    ((12 o'clock))
    you need me
    ((12 o'clock))
    you crave me
    ((12 o'clock))
    to taste me
    ((12 o'clock))
    my sweet tea
    ((12 o'clock))
    you only dream
    ((at 12 o'clock))
    to kiss me
    ((12 o'clock))
    my lips being
    ((12 o'clock))
    hynotizing
    ((12 o'clock))
    now come inside
    ((at 12 o'clock))
    while i ride
    ((12 o'clock))
    endlessly
    ((at 12 o'clock))
    to please me
    ((12 o'clock))
    i'm craving
    ((at 12 o'clock))
    you crave me
    ((12 o'clock))
    won't you be
    ((at 12 o'clock))
    my baby?....
    :spinstar: :lips: :spinstar:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    12:01

    12:01 at the door
    12:01 answer da door
    12:01 ready 4 fun

    12:02 me & u
    12:02 doing da do
    12:02 kissing
    12:02 da love u missing

    12:03 wooooweeeee!!!
    12:03 ready for a treat
    12:03 about to feast

    12:04 we slide to da floor
    12:04 feelin u more
    12:04 needing u
    12:04 wanting u

    12:05 tyme to ride
    12:05 by the fire place
    12:05 tracing ya essence
    12:05 gentle caressin

    12:06 in a bliss
    12:06 love mixing
    12:06 lite ya fire
    12:06 fullfilling ya desires

    12:07 in rapture
    12:07 into u
    12:07 blazing u
    12:08 body sweat
    12:08 feelin da depth
    12:08 in a 12 play
    12:09 mind in to mines
    12:09 u moan from da roam
    12:09 enter ya secret home

    12:10 in a bend of twist
    12:10 of this erotic bliss
    12:10 rockin in groove
    12:10 making moves

    2:15 u moan
    2:16 u scream
    2:16 from da theme
    2:16 feel like a dream
    2:30 twisted like a birdy
    2:30 in a whrilwind
    2:30 deep within
    3AM calling my name
    3AM thank u boom bammm!! :flame:

    3:15 taking flyte
    3:15 of a love delight
    3:20 out of sight
    12:00 again tomorrow night..... :lips:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was hot hot...love the way HIS $$Rich$$..added on..nice work both yall :angel1:
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH! that was so tyte:DD:D:D:D

    thanks alot mzblk and ola:)
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyme don't sit still .....most welcome Queen

    Up UP uP and awayyyyyyyyyyy))))))))>>
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl ya welcome..
    just keep writtin so i can read...
    much love...
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely! Im lovin it:) rich, GREAT follo up floe:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovelygolden1 you were a great lead for Rich to follow. Very nice you 2.
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhh
    very creative
    loving this
    Peace
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your flows are always creative...

    this was like ice cream and cake...
    your piece was cake and then Rich
    came along a la mode...wow!
     
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