Black Poetry : Midnight....By blakverb & mzblkangel

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blakverb
    midnight arrests the stars
    look at the line up/ which one
    bounced light off you last night?
    I was witness to the crime
    the stars are guilty of outlining us...
    we lay still, bodies spent
    the moon has placed it's arms around us
    blocking off the curious to this lovely
    scene...we don't move
    muscles still burn after being satisfied
    but yearning never dies

    mzblkangel
    bodies interlace..
    to begin a play with in
    the fold of midnight our
    soul arrest upon the stars
    coaching the moon
    as we ride the desire of
    of the mood we yearn
    crossin the orbs floatin
    afar and back our
    muscles burn as
    the forces take control
    for the scene is set..
    as the crime lays

    blakverb
    the angels have taken us away
    pulled our spirits from our bodies...
    if only for a minute so we can
    see ourselves dead...to pain...
    pleasure is all we know
    our aura is that of supernovas
    even the stars that watch us
    adore us

    mzblkangel
    within the light above
    a heavenly melody play
    as we have been reborn again
    the angels released our soul
    as we float into one
    upon the crime and embrace
    the essence of us….
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful collab capturing the essence...flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very smooth sweet scribe here the beauty was within
    lovin da collab poets
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice collab yall..:roll: rolling with the flow
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for the love and support
    Peace Angel
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayyuuummm!

    y'all both laced this up with some phat lines....I gots ta give it up - this is dope.
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fammmmmmmmmmm!!! thanks for the love...you know it's much appreciated...

    your brother blak
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the lovely ride...felt like I was on that plane as I read...it was most beautiful. keep on sharing.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a new constellation...
    named..."midnight"...
    beautifully serene piece...
    flow on...
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks family for the love and support on this scribe.....Angel
     
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