Black Poetry : Mi Corazon Sangre' Por Ti'

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  1. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mi Corazon Sangra Por Ti
    Hola mi amor
    Mi Corazon
    Nesecita decir adios.
    No se porque es importante que digo
    Adios.
    Que Dios esta’ contigo
    In you journey you are more than adequate to me
    Mi Corazon esta’ llorando
    Because I must say good-bye
    Dios
    GOD
    ALLAH
    IBRAHIM
    YAHWEH
    YAMAYAH
    Mi nombre no es importante
    Mas importante mi amor
    Esta Corazon
    No se porque esta’ llorando
    Adios mi amor mi Corazon esta llorando
    Y Sangra sin tu toque
    Mi Corazon llora lagrimas de amor
     
  2. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Muy bien, EW. Gracias por su travaille!
     
  3. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no comprende' Travaille. Usted.
    Soy Puerto Ricana.. pero mi espanol no es buena...
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exodus

    I have to admit my spanish is very limited but the title interested me enough to try and translate...

    if I have come close, you end this beautiful peace with...

    "My heart is crying
    and bleeds without your touch

    My heart cries love tears"

    these are beautiful words...

    would you please correct me if I'm wrong ..I would love to read it written in english so I get the full meaning of your words....

    K
     
  5. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exodus Williams,

    Por favor, dispensa mi desacierto! Travaille=hechura, mas travaille es Francais. Mi mentecato.
    Mi espanol es aprendiz :toast:
    Su poesia es excelente.
     
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    I loved this piece, your heat speaketh in different languages I feel this piece thank you for the read