Black Poetry : ...................Metaphysical Moments

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  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes angelic
    i love this poetic hand of yours
    this was very very much on da money
    i love the way u lay it down ..
     
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    oh girl i love this
    nice nice..
    much love
     
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    wow...and i just see stars :lol:

    you got an ill way
    of describe'n moments in time...
    very ill indeed...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    :jawdrop: whoa lawd, angelicsage. I love this part right here:
    Falling through dimensions
    Coiling in time’s ascension

    I think this is somethin we should all strive for, meditation and making the most out of every moment. I know I've said it before, my sister, but dang I wish I could write like you. This is straight up art. :bowdown:
     
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    yes it do my sister
    i am indeed feeling the moment
    nice very nice
    Peace
     
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    mercy sis...:jawdrop:

    I read you and I'm like okay we might as well proclaim the discovery of a whole new language...Angelicsage... lol
    because what you do with words is nothing short of amazing...you give birth to thoughts never even imagined...just great :)

    you REALLY ripped this one my sista :bowdown:
     
  8. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your words carried me on wings, simply beautiful. like falling between clouds.
     
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    Oh Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!
    That was tha best!!!!!!!!
    Couldn't see my mind thinking less!!!!!!!!!!
    Gurl you put my mind
    and rhymes
    to a test
    That's why you're my big sister...I guess!!!!!!!!!!!
    You got the picture right......stay blessed!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich…our hands have one thing in common…
    Our passion for writing….Peace and Blessings!


    Mzblk…Glad your feeling the vibe…:thanks:



    Khasm… :lol: your hilarious…yeah…I use to see stars too… :lol: :lol:
    But I kinda like what I see now…much more, Peace Broh!


    Gempis…girl..I’m in awe of your writing…often
    For example…no satiation…was the b.o.m.b
    Thanks for the love sister but your just as exquisite!
    Peace and Love! :)


    Blue…&….Ola….thanks for taking the time to
    Read and reply…wasn’t sure anyone would feel
    Me on….metaphysically…Thanks a lot for that!
    Peace & Blessings :grouphug:



    Trinit…well let me say this in Angelicsage dialect
    You are like the north star on my page…shining
    Through no matter how cloudy a day…and that’s
    What I love about you and your originality!
    Much love Sis!:fairy:


    Randee…I am moved by your words…wing?…why thank you!


    Foxy…my lil sis…droppin a flow on my page
    With pro-style lyrics and rhythm just to show
    Me you feel me…and guess what…I’m feeling
    That lil flow you left for me…Much luv lil sis!
     
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