Black Poetry : Metaphorically Speaking

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why does society choose to down people for the things that they feel?
    For love
    cannot be controlled or explained
    It is an animal,
    wild and untamed.
    It knows no age, gender, race, or name.

    There is a thin line between right and wrong,
    Yet it is an abstract line.
    Love can never be wrong, in any shape, fashion, or form.
    However, many people of this generation.
    Intertwine the denotations
    of 'love' and 'lust'.
    Lust being on the border line,
    Love at the peak of righteousness.

    Yet no one wants to accept me.
    For now I feel- my nature, my lifestyle.
    It makes me want to yell, scream.
    It is my life which I will do with as I please.
    Because my desicions only
    determine wheter my soul will fly
    in the greatest paradise.
    I refuse to let society mess with a beautiful thing.
    The prettiest thing I have and ever will see:
    MY HAPPINESS.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed well felt
    ya only happiness & joy
    is case inside ya love u vow

    one whom try to enter wit
    neg vibe is scribe off like the wind
    keep ya lovin heart afloat
    tyte piece of reality
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME POET!! I really like this poem it shows how beautiful a poet you are. I really can relate to this one. Until next time peace and blessins and keep flowin. ;)
     
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    nice scribe...heart felt...
    keep it coming...
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK CHA THANK CHA THANK CHA!!!!
    keep the love coming
    love, peace, and chicken grease
     
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    Much felt by me, strong flow!!
     
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    Play..your on a roll....
     
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    CASE CLOSED

    Yours, is a sound argument that's tight to boot!

    1poetsought ~ :toast:
     
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