Black Poetry : Metaphoric Queen

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  1. Proverbs31Woman

    Proverbs31Woman Be kinder than necessary! MEMBER

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    Metaphoric Queen

    I will take you on a journey to many places
    With bright colors, meaning and clarity with open spaces
    Your vision will be magnified the world becomes new
    Words become a silhouette of abstract views

    What once was dead has now become alive
    You no longer have to search for truth you will find
    Understanding surrounds you it empowers your climb
    It is your voice of a powerful proclamation on the line

    But you have to be ready to move forward
    From the stagnant waters to the ocean before us
    Come ride with me and flow in this journey together
    Free your mind to hunt for this metaphoric treasure!
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Real Truth!



    Well Proverbs31Woman...you a poetess too! That was great, just great, excellent prose and rhyme.

     
  3. Proverbs31Woman

    Proverbs31Woman Be kinder than necessary! MEMBER

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    Thank you, I'm a baby poetess and loving the journey!
     
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    nice piece poet...
    don't get discouraged by the lack of love up in here...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Proverbs31Woman Be kinder than necessary! MEMBER

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    Thanks for the encouragement khasm! Writing is good for the soul, so mission accomplished!

    Peace and blessings to ya!
     
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    As mind fly free inside ya lines
    u got me on a journey a sweet ride
    love the flava of ya pen sis ...u go gurl !!!!
     
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    Thank you for love brotha!
     
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