Black Poetry : metaphoric kisses

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Apr 4, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmone
    (lovely)

    metaphoric kisses--
    touching my skin with--
    full pink lips--

    tickling my mindframe--
    gripping my hindbrain--
    sustaining my reality...

    metaphoric kisses--
    gracing my presence with--
    thought-shattering-intensity--

    ****...what's my name?

    (Doesn't matter)

    just keep giving me--
    metaphoric kisses--
    tropical wind smooth--

    stealthy, similar to the way of the ninja--

    metaphoric kisses crushing me--
    like...
    rolling boulders on my glasshouse

    yet in still...

    keep

    kissing

    me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YESSSSS!! OUTSTANDING AND WELL WRITTEN!
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  3. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's like a drug huh ??-
    Kisses that re-arrange your molecular structure -
    but you don't want her to stop- wordbond !
     
  4. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    o me o my!

    this was tyte-
    this better get like mad hits
    cuz this is the tytest work...
    innovative and immaculate imagry....

    u go boy!!



    *hypedashellwhileigotreaditagain*
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TPSEAN...

    personally... having mastered the art of
    the Perfect Soulful Kiss... i don't know if
    i should do this... but... you asked for it
    ryght??!!... cause i can't be responsible for
    what happens next...

    :kiss: MMMUUUAAAAAHHHHHH!!

    :lol: what you think?!

    i loved this peace!!!

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep tight ya flow fella!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  7. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the love is OVERWHELMING!!!

    thank u ALL!!!


    sean.
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean kisses, kisses and more kisses
     
  9. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the reply

    love is love

    i enjoy the love.


    sean.
     
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