Black Poetry : Metamorphasis

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  1. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Birthed from my cocoon
    Emerging as a newborn butterfly
    Giving your world the memory of my past..
    The beauty of my metamorphasis..
    You watch in awe as my wings become stronger...
    Questioning their patterns....their beauty...how it came about..
    What my future will be like...
    If you will be able to fit in my puzzle called Purpose
    as I soar to new heights..testing my wings...
    I might fall a few times...but the wind of life will not let me...
    For it knows my strength....
    Not allowing me to be brought down by those who have not morphed yet
    I love my strength
    I love your's..You are a butterfly like me...
    My name is Nisa..Nice to meet you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a sweet release love da flow u pose
    welcome within happy to read u again

    do hope u decide on a membership here at destee's
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    support a community of unity bond here look at what u missing
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    Oh this is cool! I dig the imagery. Keep it up.
     
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    I enjoyed the whole concept of this, and the image of the butterfly, soaring freely.
     
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    the was so pretty and easy reading
    really enjoyed this scribe...
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nisa

    We have so many of those in life...metamorphoses.

    :thanks: for that beautiful description of our transformation from one stage of life to the next.

    :toast:
     
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    Very cool piece Nisa, nice to meet u as well. I really like the analogy of butterflies, we all make changes in life and as we keep changing we'll keep learning. Thanks for this beautiful write!! :spin:
     
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    This is awesome. Flow on, girl, flow on.
     
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    Fly Butterfly, Nisa, Be
     
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    This was a sweet emergence, Nisa. Nice read