Black Poetry : Meta-Dome: Beyond The Cortex

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, May 21, 2007.

  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    I like this flow--it breaks away from many of the worn symbols of today and asks that we look to another place, another space to see just what is going on--we'd all be surprised at what we might learn--well done--Amun-Ra

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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes i can't help myself

    i can only write what comes to me

    and this is what came out

    i feel the urge to get "back" to the universal flow

    as opposed to the material flow

    yes those with the 3rd I will understand

    and others will wonder in amazement

    thank you the love and understanding RA

    peace

    DSS
     
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    ok...ok...this is just sick...:sick: it is ridiculous for you to come in here and hit'em so hard...

    Bro, i really, REALLY likes this one...:welldone:

    keep 'em comin' and keep making us think deeper...

    one.
     
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    Very nice flow!!! Keep on writing writer!!!!
     
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    Sometimes what is beyond what we normally can see, yet feel, is difficult to pen, but you've done quite well making what's felt, vivid.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you poet

    MO MO MO - nice to have you back, there's more where this came from

    lol

    karma55 - you hold on shawty, and make the karma you speak of a positive spin, hang in there don't buckle to the bullcrap, peace and if you need me to answer questions for you hit me [email protected] i'll be there like your cyber stepdad lol

    Watz - you are so real, yes this piece doesn't really offer much, but i challenge the reader to open up their senses, to look at what is going on around them, the energy is moving at an accelerated pace now, but will we be able to keep pace

    peace thank you all for the love
     
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