Black Poetry : MET A VAMPIRE

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MET A VAMPIRE

    Write rhymes that annoys with enzymes that destroys bacteria
    And smack the whack and inferior and crack posterior with diphtheria
    Tell no lie I’m a swellguy with sick lyrics, never dodge art
    That’s a large part of my life it keeps my heart nice and smart
    Slightly fine qualith with a nightly designed policy stop writing at
    Midnight, thought I saw a blood sucking vampire around a campfire
    Let me get my boss cross to toss some holiness on its damp desires
    Heard a team of bats scream this and that these extreme stats requires
    Attention, could lead to violence I stay clever they never think love just wanna
    Drink blood, all of a sudden a fast take heard my house glass break gonna
    See what entered the static never ease don’t want a lymphatic disease
    So I duck their bites but may get struck tonight grabbed my cross and squeezed
    Mostly from my experience this presented a ghostly appearance may fall on my knees
    And pray, the graveyard is the source must use brave force to escape
    Oh boy this calamity could destroy my family must be strong and win great
    It’ks a disgrace to come face to face with a creature from the dark just this
    Feature alone could start a new blood line now in my thug mind need a brisk
    Pale of holy water in order to end this drama my mamma told me there would
    Be nights like this now I must fight to exist as a human being really not good
    To become a vampire, must do scrimmage with the image that is before me
    Happened so dang quick now a fang chick in a see through gown I adore she
    “you want sex”? that was a bold try but I told a lie “or no” “this cake is soft
    Want me to take off my panties?” “or no” the temptation was ned and boss
    **** got hard as Japanese Arithmetic, wow this is bad **** felt like Brad Pitt
    Interview with a vampire
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great, creative, & lyricaly inventive
    had me lookin around for a vampire
    i love it
     
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    Ok, but better wear more than a scarf around your neck. Flow on rhymebad.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da bite ....look out now this was chewable
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props for real
     
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    flo on!:couple:
     
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    yes rhymingbadly

    i've meant vampires too

    not all suck blood though

    lol:qqb006::ref::bullseye::em16:
     
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    Just in time for Halloween

    You don't suck...

    Your poem is mean
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the props on this one for real
     
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    back for da bite !!!!!
     
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