Black Poetry : Messiah

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The messiah walked around tattered and torn

    With only the mission with which he was born

    The task of, sending blessings to those in need
    And In return he was given wounds that bleed

    For every kind word he was gifted with a stone
    Some bruised his face others broke bones

    He continued this way till the end of his days
    Till the black of his hair was replaced glistening gray

    Late in life a companion finally asked
    Why did he never strike back or whip a little ***

    He responded,”In the market place of life, one can only spend what one has,
    And in my purse all I had was a smiles and good laughs

    (c) 2005 MRKS
     
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    Brother BlkThunder ... very nice ... encouraging ... peaceful ... poetry!

    So glad to have you back in the house !!!! :wave:

    gosh ... where ya been iz 'et ??? ... you don't hafta answer that ...

    i'm just glad to be reading you again!

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    Much Love and Peace.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth scribing poet........tyte drop
     
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    Blkthunder-

    Nice piece of our Messiah...write on poet...write on!

    Nubi
     
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    All the Messiah has is love for us, despite it all. The way you posed this piece brought a smile to my face. Do flow on poet.
     
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    Thanks all for the read...
    Destee ....just going through life's process....
     
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    I enjoyed reading that..much love.
     
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