Black Poetry : Messed up for love

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  1. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right now I'm crying
    because of the things that you've told me
    Inside I'm dying
    but all I want is you to hold me
    The emotional scares you've given to me run deep
    But I need you next to me because without you I can't
    sleep
    You make me feel so low
    tear me down inside
    but all I truly know
    is that I need you in my life
    You cause me so much pain, your so cold so distant
    but no matter how much rain I hunger for your kisses
    I know you wont always be the same
    if I just hold on I know you'll change
    If I take this pain a few more nights
    It will be worth the love I'll gain...
    right?
    So I'll take his hits his blows and shoves
    Yes I'll take all this
    Just so I can feel loved
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, I hope you're not actually going through this. It's a feeling of lost love, loneliness, and desperation...it's a horrible place to be, I know. You expressed these feelings so well, so emotionally written.
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    masochist need to be loved in their own speacial way
    Your poem shows the turth to our dismay
    Great display of poetic skill and talent
    To post some thing like this you are poet gallant
     
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    much love to you:grouphug:
    feeling the deepness in your scribe
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so heart felt and deep too
    had me into it like a book
    soon it will become sweeter
    tyte scribing here
     
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