Black Poetry : Message to my beloveth

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Swirling in da
    lunar pool as
    neptune spins
    an emotional
    spool of love
    dancing cross
    cosmos liquefy
    da heavens to
    drip drop ova
    da seed planted
    in da earth
    of my heart
    and my love grows
    deep in my soul
    for u daily
    blossome & blooming
    i ask thy Father
    to watch and care
    for thee in his divine
    gracious wayz
    coz i compromise my
    devotion of love
    to ware her heart
    around my finger
    as our love will
    alwayz linger
    with these vows
    of togetherness
    faith , truth , feelings
    promises of honor to
    cherish in a long lasting
    she is the stone of my
    lovin heart upon da rock
    i stand and threw da dry
    cracked & splintered pain
    da soul joins wit reality
    trust and graceful hope
    tomorrow i shall rise again
    to meet da sun, starz & moon
    cross orbits of her soul
    forever hold and cascade
    inside her reasons i will
    kiss da bliss of comfort
    as i caress her needs
    and shalter her body
    from danger my galloping
    beauty to hear da harp
    strings play da tunes
    and voice dance inside
    my head setting off a
    radiant beam to treasure
    i leave this upon da table
    and from thy heart unto u
    my humble beloveth.........
    :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: i felt each line as i read
    deep spoken emotions for a true love
    dancing cross cosmos now thas a feeling
    i love this flow
    you just be hitting every inch
    of my heart when you bring it like this :love:


    :kiss:
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it one of them days
    when da heart speaks
    and bring it from da
    great rapture of da soul
    out the JRS 054 files ....Thankz a million sistah Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i sho love these files...
    keep doing it baby cause i be feeling it...:)
     
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    most humble welcome thankz again
     
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    Awwww.... why can't it be ME? Why won't someone write love poems to ME!? :cry: But this was real nice, bro... :luvv:
     
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    awe sistah i'll do one just for u ......thankz a million !
     
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    *crying stops* Promise? :lips:
     
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    promise ......and i don't break them !
    look for it soon so weep not ....smile sunshine.
     
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    So beautiful, these air born images of the cosmos dripping down for all to see. Heartfelt scribe as the ink floats to the page.
     
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