Black Poetry : Message To Michael (when you get through)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShadeeLadee, May 19, 2002.

  1. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as I watched you struggle for air
    I wanted to reach out to you
    the gasping was making me crazy
    but then I realized you weren't in pain

    I was amazed I have to admit
    because I'd never seen pleasure
    look so painful, yet I knew
    if I reached out to touch you

    the moment would disintegrate
    and you wouldn't even appreciate
    my ignorant point of view
    I didn't need to relieve your pain

    You created the suffering
    and you relish the changes
    I can only imagine the twisted version
    of this story running rampant inside you

    So I just sat and watched you
    try to catch your breath, lips and fingertips
    turning blue...

    this is, after all, what you wanted me to do


    SWT
     
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    hmmmmmm ShadeeLady ... now you know this peace got me ta think'n and well ... uuhhhhh ... i'm still and will probably always be ... think'n on this peace ...

    Thank you for painting a picture with paint that never fades.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    SOUND LIKE AUTOEROTICASPHYSIXATION!

    dayyyyyyyuuuuuuum!:jawdrop: Hence the name Shadeeladee!
    Girl you got me madd trippin up in here...I have read some very provacative pieces in the room today!!!!!
    SPRING FEVER:hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
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    Shadee

    I've read this peace about four times and I know I still can't define the true meaning of it..at first I thought it was sexual, but then I get the feeling it goes much deeper than that, because to me it speaks of emotional pain...but whatever the story behind it, I do recognise it as a powerful piece of writing...

    K
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are a deep lil sista....

    this is awesome stuff, sweetheart :heart:

    flow

    MMA...
     
  6. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes, we meet and mate with people who will forever make us feel it.... whether we like it or not...there is an eternal connection...

    Shade
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was on da real ......tyght scribe.....now u go on flow
    me some mo!!!
     
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