Quiet Poetry Lounge : message of sadie

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tap inside my existence wallop in my slumber of reasons
    as i sit inside da corner of my chamber, rivering in the heated
    blood dat stain my feet, the trail of notions left
    upon the walk where man of beast soak up the taste and
    woman dem by the double edge sword tamed in the block
    both on a journey to harbor shadow of doubt looms the landz
    with judgement is set forth, to the worthy souls and humble
    hearts asking to caress in the grace to defeat the madness
    place'd upon me forth i didn't hold one key nor should i be
    the keeper to the vault where truth lay still safely.

    Mindz hit redemption and da motions of fractured dreams
    crack into , yet a wall is up and the foundation is laid
    stronger i compromise in heart to hoover over to protect
    your worth and save the treasures of midstream
    the pools of love moving closer where my final cry is kissed
    by salty tears dat roll in the depth of sorrow and darkness
    how man can bite wo-man like da hungry wolf and yet bunny
    round in smiles of tap betrayal and no not the worth of a Queen
    to vow destruction is to kill thy wife and daughter of own kind
    so the cries in the night be the holla of self foolishness and mix
    paths to truth and reality yet continue to stick and pull.

    I rise out the shell of bondage, out the shadows of doubt
    from the pits of bolts that strikes i can feel the hopeless
    hunger and weakness i clash in tides and slam the doorrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    deep thoughts flow
    release...likes this one
    flow on.......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I no long can stand by and watch
    my mind is heavy as to my heart
    thankz sistah Angel 4 visiting inside sadieeeeeeeeeeeee!!
     
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    When you go in dark and deep you do it with gusto. Sounds like a self realization here, breaking the chains that bind, and releasing the soul. I'm sitting here with my eyes open wide....
     
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    Brother, you are flowin on a very deep mental poetic vibe lately, and I'm enjoyin it so much. This one is 100 percent dope.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz watz i too have been hit to open my eyez
    to the terror of what has overcast the fate of
    existance
    my humble thankz for visiting sadieeeeeeeee!!
     
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    gempis it's indeed the mental spray clashing
    and the depth of corruption of mankind tyme
    to lay it out so ears may hear ! one who don't may wilt

    thank u 4 visiting ole sadieeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    indeed sadie
    is food to the mental
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    thank u sistah blue she really come strong at times
    i'm afraid of her !
     
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    if so u shall need her call her name she is the judge the lawyer and
    upholding
     
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