Black Poetry : Message from a Poem

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Apr 20, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you walk by
    peer around your keyboard
    glance at me every now and then
    too nervous too ask my name
    say anything I think

    I see you looking 33, 51, maybe 167
    times a week and you
    still don't speak
    do you have a voice or
    do I have to be psychic?

    You make a brother nervous
    looking through my window
    knowing me and saying nothing...
    and all my piece got was
    87 views and 9 verbal replies...

    if ya gone see me please judge me.

    (c) 2001 blakverb "trippin'"
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i love it BlakVerb!
    sho' ya rite

    let the poem speak!

    *smiling*

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You did what you said...

    and I am right there with ya
    on this soooo true statement!

    "If ya' gon' read the prose
    the least ya' could do is reply
    and tell me whatcha' thinkin'"
    ...we can all take some
    ConStRuktIve Critisi(him)/or (her)
    from all onlookers!

    :heart: this scribe Blak!!
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    just thought of something Blak ...
    could be folk like me
    reading it 2 or 3 times
    cause here i am again
    peeping what N2urSoul
    had ta say

    *still smiling*

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i don't know what we is gone do, but i understand ya. i have one that was hit/viewed/read/molested about 115 times and i got 20 replies or so and i know about 6 or more were mine replying to the replies i got, but immma hit ya till i kaint hit ya no mo.
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    see ... here i am again ...

    peeking at what UbZoRbShUn said

    hehehe

    *giggling now*

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    see ... here i am again ...
    peep'n what Sherykah had ta say

    nuth'n but love forya Blak!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MMMMMMM Babydoll!

    Mmmmm,you are so sweet!! Love you tender,so shy,I still pass you by,you are so sweet,love you tender,magically,caried away,verses on display,man made the money but money never made the man,you make me glad and full of laughter,mmm,what a man,what a man,what a MIGHTY GOOD MAN!,Oldschool still represents,give me some suga,kisses so sweet,make satisfieng desire complete,I just want to be your babydoll,mmm,babydoll,dem suga,I just want to be yo gurl.
    Flow on like you know how Young Black King.
    Desert Storm
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see I'm doing the same dag-gone thang...

    that Destee done did up in here...
    I keeps comin' back for more
    of those verses from a Blakman's
    SoulurN2 dear ...
    And if you remember what crow said,
    I be Look-a-Who'n
    at ya' all the time
    and it ain't just on
    Destee either....!!
    :kiss:
    :kiss:
    :kiss: :heart: ya'doll!!
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    i can dig it!! (lol)

    & dats all i'll say...

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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