Black Poetry : Message from a Poem

[blakverb]

you walk by
peer around your keyboard
glance at me every now and then
too nervous too ask my name
say anything I think

I see you looking 33, 51, maybe 167
times a week and you
still don't speak
do you have a voice or
do I have to be psychic?

You make a brother nervous
looking through my window
knowing me and saying nothing...
and all my piece got was
87 views and 9 verbal replies...

if ya gone see me please judge me.

(c) 2001 blakverb "trippin'"

 

[Destee]

i love it BlakVerb!
sho' ya rite

let the poem speak!

*smiling*



Destee

 

[N2urSoul]

You did what you said...

and I am right there with ya
on this soooo true statement!

"If ya' gon' read the prose
the least ya' could do is reply
and tell me whatcha' thinkin'"
...we can all take some
ConStRuktIve Critisi(him)/or (her)
from all onlookers!

this scribe Blak!!

 

[Destee]

just thought of something Blak ...
could be folk like me
reading it 2 or 3 times
cause here i am again
peeping what N2urSoul
had ta say

*still smiling*



Destee

 

[UbZoRbShUn]

i don't know what we is gone do, but i understand ya. i have one that was hit/viewed/read/molested about 115 times and i got 20 replies or so and i know about 6 or more were mine replying to the replies i got, but immma hit ya till i kaint hit ya no mo.