Black Poetry : Message For A Queen and King

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  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What are you going to do with the rest of your life
    What's already gone is either forgotten or a memory
    It only burries you when you lose yourself in past strife
    And regret what's already history
    Try as you will you won't be able to relive one hour
    Nor yet even a minute or second from your yesterday
    This is something beyond the limited power
    Of the little ones molded from clay
    The present only is the gift that we hold
    The past holds lessons that we need to learn
    The future is not promised no matter how bold
    Or how hard we work trying to earn
    Make your gifts the presents count well
    And yes plan for a future great
    Never waste the present or you fail
    This is true and useless to debate
    i hope you got the message i'm tasked to bring
    That i was blessed to state it well
    Our gift is the present so don't just let it waste
    It's your decision O' Queen and King
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel the very strong truth you sew into this poem....

    Very wise rasheed...

    Keep scrybin...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said poet i felt every line
     
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    Words of wisdom, scribe of consciousness...

    Keep 'em comin' big brother.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True thoughts graced the page...thought provoking piece.
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PLAY, RICH,PositiveMindset, watzinaname,
    Your very positive responses to this scribe is heart felt.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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