Black Poetry : mesmerized

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Sep 13, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it was your voice
    the way you spoke
    how you said my name, "ke-lli"
    sent butterflies in crazy flutter in my belly
    the calmness in your eyes
    your touch
    i knew i'd fall too deep if i started
    and i did fall
    far and long and deep and hard
    and i'm still here
    mesmerized by you.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was beautiful wildflower...
    short but very very sweet....:heart:
     
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    i think this is the mostly lovely fall of them all...... makes a girl feel she's the queen of the ball dig that yall .... u go girl
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LURK... thanks man.

    herlove... yeah, that's why it was so easy
    to fall in love with him. thanks

    -7:spinstar:
     
  5. alyce

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    there is

    nothing like the way your man says your name...as if he named you ~ as if the meaning of it deepens.... and no other voice can move you inside. I feel you!

    this piece has hipped me to the real truth & beauty of the 'k-ness'. Oh yes! :)

    ba
     
  6. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sho you right, alyce!
    thank you sister/friend...
    -7:spinstar:
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    love ain't a bad thing

    feeling ya poet

    DSS

    all the way
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    naw... it's actually
    really good!
    thanks So'ja! -7