Black Poetry : Mermaid in the Mud......

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Help me ! Help me to get out of here!..
    I,m stuck....
    stuck in tha mud...
    my fins are hurting me..
    i cant breath...
    Lord come water me...
    wash me into the Ocean...
    Help me Lord...
    I cant move.....
    carry me there....

    "Didnt i told you not to go there""
    "It looks Magical""
    "But it isnt""
    " Out there the waves wont calm you
    down""
    ""the Depth isnt like the one you know
    dear""
    ""THe shelves arent as beautifull as they
    look""
    "'The pearls arent as shiny as they seem""
    "Those Human corals are more complicated
    than the ones you,ve seen ,they look
    simulair........but they are not!"""

    ""Mermaid be honest about it.........
    what brought you here.......?""

    ""O i see......... a MAN?
    ""Ok my creation i,ll put you back in the sea..
    but listen carefully....
    Dont go back there ....
    Wait patiently.....
    cause eventualy...
    i will bring you..
    something...
    Real....................""
     
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    This is saying something!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is indeed Poet and I think I know what it is this is a nice flow peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin u .....it's saying a lot with depth too it
    stay put forth true love with be given unto u
    when the tyme is right

    i love dis one
     
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    That was heavi, standard. feelin that still.
     
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    this was beautiful...i love the imagery...symbolism...and imagination.... :)

    ~lovely~
     
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