Black Poetry : Mentally.....Going crazy

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok fam this is the last one for a few....i had a burst of something
    had to flow and release and exhale :laugh:

    See I am goin crazy
    running in a daze
    ish all hazy….
    I am trying to deal
    But I run
    Just run
    Scared of the end….
    Scared of the beginning….
    Don’t know how to turn
    Just flowing but
    Goin crazy
    Twisted
    And confused
    Tryin to just deal
    with what
    My heart feels
    As ur soul pulls
    mentally full of you
    A dream I am not
    trying to escape
    sweet melody of love
    got a hold on me

    I cant begin to deal…
    Secretly
    Sweetly
    In a hush…..
    Lately
    I feel lost inside your world…
    Where
    we talk and I giggle
    we agree we laugh
    we share…we are two
    floating as one
    in shy hush of a smile
    blushing
    dancing
    loving
    dayum boy…….
    our hearts meet
    no matter what….

    Confessing a love so true…..
    Know what I feel is right
    My heart cries out
    Can you hear?
    Do you hear my silent
    Screams…in my dreams?
    In my heart….you live
    In my mind…dayum..
    running
    running
    And I cant seem to stop….
    But some how you
    always pull me back and
    Hold on tight
    I am all cried out
    And tired of running…
    No more broken heart
    No one could of ever told me
    Loving you would be like this
    Sweet
    Charming
    Amazing
    This ish…I tell ya
    Yes indeed….i maybe a fool
    Living in a dream but …
    Mending as you love and
    Adore…
    Hold and cherish me
    Flowing in my mental
    Releasing the truth and
    Flowing
    Flowing
    Flowing….
    I can sing a song and just
    Release
    Release
    Release
    Just………….
    …………release…..
    going crazy….
    Dizzy
    Hazy
    What a maze……..
    Yearning for your touch
    Craving you
    your eyes my eyes
    meet and I go spinning
    Moaning
    Roaming
    Just there……
    your smile
    your kiss
    our dream….feeling me

    Laughing not being scared
    Just want to stop running
    Stop running
    Stop running
    I just want to stop running
    Finally realizing…..
    This is for me
    A true love…..

    A blkangel thang.....2004​
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice MzBlk. I feel you. Don't be afraid of the beginning. You know there is no end. To this love, this touch. This smile. Only you get. You see. You know. Mad love you know you have for him, he knows. He anticipates that moment too. :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very mentally deep scribing
    of da heart felt inner beings
    release and worry not forth
    the start is a new day and
    sweet embrace flow on !
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Rich Hodee
    for the love and support
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love the depth of this...very nice...
     
  6. Earthly Allure

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    Infinite in it's artistry.
    Even as a man I can relate to
    what was written. A truly fine piece
    angel.
    Be blessed.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    this is intense, sis. I likes. :D
     
  8. SensualReality

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    Breathe in Breathe out

    That was very good,I could feel you on each line

    ~peace and love always~
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mzblk
    Once again you come with the style and depth
    I just don't know what to say about you....... :flame: :flame: :flame: :flame: :flame:

    You go my sister!!!!!!!!!!
     
  10. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot, Hot, Hoooooooot!!!

    Wow, that was real nice.... Somehow, I got out of it a description of that initial honeymoon period in a relationship. You know the one, when you first start seeing someone, maybe you guys aren't even dating yet, just sharing a little time, and youi just can't get that person out of your head.... Nice.... real nice.....

    :love: Thanks for sharing,

    Brooke
     
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