Black Poetry : MENTALLY CRUSHED

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Mar 23, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tired
    torn
    striped
    killed
    by the lack
    of support
    no rush
    no fuss
    top stuff
    mentally
    crushed
    stressed
    confessed
    confused
    i loose
    beat down
    lost of
    direction
    seeking
    wishing
    as i walk
    the lane of
    defeat
    yet prayer
    and hope looms
    in the mind
    as i walk on
    and fine my
    peace in da
    valley
    then i vanish
    again !
    blowin up[ :bomb:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep
    thought
    feeling this
    flow and
    release
    :grouphug:
     
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    I'm so with ya on this one, brother man. Feelin ya big, and this is a very very tight drop. Good to see you again - missed you this weekend. :heart:
     
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    I'm lovin' your flow.
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH,

    Powerfully expressive of what it means to feel "Mentally Crushed" and just as always, within it is the ray of hope..........

    "yet prayer
    and hope looms
    in the mind"

    Peace and Blessings
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my god.....this was so....so.....so.....so......deep and then some.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as always my brother u have written another one 4 the books... Dap'z!!
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bruh you never fail to bring it whenever you write!
    As important as it is to acknowledge when you're mentally crushed
    It's just as important to reach towards the "mental mending"

    This is a very tight flow
    Felt it 100%

    Oh yeah.....

    Don't think i forgot about the book trade :laugh:


    Peace and love
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    every now and then we all get that mental beat down feeling.
    that's when its important to pray and surround ourselves with
    family and friends to nourish our spirit.

    keep your head up Rich... we love you :wink:

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    Down, but not out. Keep looking toward the light, the light of the Lord remains everlasting.
     
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