Black Poetry : MentalCourse.Cum

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Aug 3, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweat drips from your body
    onto the letters of the keyboard
    and you see past the vivid imagery
    on the 17" monitor looking at a
    website simulcast sexual fantasy
    You quickly become aroused with each
    stroke as your salted-watuh beads
    chase and press the single keys
    that are typed
    precisely to spell my name

    D
    A
    W
    N


    You egress at the opt-eye-cal thought
    of my virtual presence
    and listen to a murmur to catch
    the pace of my sensual voice
    that runs rivers of
    toasted almond want on your
    milk chocolate flesh
    can I lick your vocal chords
    and explore your pharynx and larynx...
    allow me to touch your sound
    hold your thoughts
    embrace your dialect
    squeeze your speech
    until I please you
    Leave your own taste
    behind to tantilize my ears
    and let them play a symphony
    from my eardrums
    that incite erotic rhythms
    beats that move me
    push me to a slow grind
    and then faster
    then slower --
    slow
    Use me as your sounding board
    to bounce the timbre of your
    voice off of
    lyricize five of my erogenous zones
    work your pitch to a
    climactic depth
    composing the release as a
    scaled high note that explodes
    from your throat
    Loosen your vernacular pattern
    and become my lexical freak
    converse with me until I become
    sated...and internet ready
    or until I cannot control
    my own fingers
    as they guide the stroll of
    the mechanical mouse --
    even until my hands are
    freed from the alphabetical keys
    speak to me through
    these cyber walls
    until I am spent


    MentalCourse.Cum



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww sista-gurllllll!!!!!

    You neva, and I mean NEVA fail to speak my mind!

    Love this....you know I love it all...but what worked me OVA was all that licking, squeezing, embracing the essence of the object of our desire as we CUMmunicate our love via cyber space. How powerful is this medium...where the very stroking of those 'special' alphabets on the keyboard...can bring us pleasure beyond comprehension!

    I'm feelin you sis! Yes ma'am!

    a
     
  3. blakverb

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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH.......WE.....my keyboard is about to "pass the ***** out!"....I'm sorry too strong a words for this scribe...."Lexical freak?"....you a bad bad bad ...........................................................................................................................bad sister.

    "10,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,..."

    Ndeed!

    blak
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    N2MYSOUL

    your genius shines ever so brightly

    this is world class work

    loving it i don't even know what to say
    expect
    thanks for the fix


    DSSNY
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2....



    ummm... sis....

    is it hot as hell in here... or is it just me? :lol:

    as usual... you flowed da hell outta this one!!

    One.
    SunShyne~
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah A

    Gurl, I couldn't have framed this better myself... you know exactly what I'm vibin' on & you feel me!

    Thank you sustah -- for always bein' U!
    If no one has told you lately - I definitely appreciate YOU!

    One :heart:
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Oh dear! YES... U know just how "bad" I am :wink: YOU sir, are certainly somethin' else ya' **** self :lol:

    You know I look forward to readin' your commentz as they mean just as much to me as you do (LangSton) -- gotcha'!


    One Luv
    Two :heart:'s
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DSSNY

    You sir, are more than WELCOME! Get your fix from me anytyme day or nyght! :lol:

    Where my Boo at?! :kiss:


    Much :heart:
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA

    :hot: :hot: :hot: Gurl, I'm fannin them flames my **** self!! Thanks for the read sista friend!
     
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    **** !

    GROUNDBREAKINGLY...EROTIC.

    PERIOD

    HMMMMMMM:D
    I LIKE

    G-MAN