Black Poetry : ~~MENTAL~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need a period of time....

    some solitude,

    time to reflect and mentaly eject.

    See, this thing came at a time
    when I wasn't prepared to deal with it.

    Have I been so sheltered that I'm not able to
    handle this at all?

    Its like a twelve year old recieving 100 million
    dollars with no understanding, no reason or protective
    collar.
    I'm confused and a bit scared, but not enough
    to holler.

    I close my eyes and the room is
    finally silent.
    The sound of my beating heart fills me from
    head to toe and my mind races.

    I couldn't stand the rain and
    God knows I can't stand this type of
    sweet pain.
    Its a downpour on the inside and
    i'm shaking from this emotional pneumonia
    and in danger of never again being sane.

    I need a cold, calm and cool moment
    to collect my broken reserves.
    I need a bit of sunshine, a drink of Corona and
    a light breeze...
    Somehow I have to learn to get through this
    heavy freeze and get life surging through
    my veins again.

    I'm high off of chilled Pinot Grigio and Jasmine Incense.
    God, I still can't seem to make heads or tails of this situation,
    whether it's past or future tense.
    Tension and smooth dissension,
    I fall and fall into this black rain,
    not able to see my way, but loving the sweet taste.

    I really have to get some time to myself...

    I really have to come to grips with reason,

    Lord I need a good hold on my reason.

    I need to have some type of reserve and calm to tackle
    and shove.
    I gotta get something to help me handle an
    attack by a feeling called...LOVE.

    Copyright 2004
    PropheticNsyght
    "Poeta Nasciture, Non Fit!"
     
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    very nice a smooth flow feeling ya on dis
     
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    whewwwwwwwwwwwwwww! sometime
    there is no help line when love strike it hit
    hard and heavy deep and sweet u can't run from it
    nor hide just enjoy the ride of dis feeling call LOVE.
    tyte drop!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love to you and thank you for your support! Always yours.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D***! Rich, you definitely feel me on this point then! It does indeed hit hard! Thank you for the love bruh as always.
     
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    Re: Mental

    WOW! very deep poem. Love will do that to you . Great Write.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again ma, thank you so much for your delicious support. You are truly a doll!
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wheww!!
    I feel u on this one!
    Very smooth and honest
    lovin' it
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you love for your beauty and love! God bless
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was absolutely wonderful. The way you described the pulling, the yin and yang of the indecision, fighting for naught because the love is more powerful than your will to fight it. Bravo poet.