Black Poetry : mental twist.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da mental twist it
    place on my mind..
    hurts….
    Going thru demons
    and releasin in hell
    I am holdin it in…
    Tryin to be strong..
    But my heart seems to stop
    Thinkin round and round
    Not understandin try to define
    And unfold this thing called love
    It pierce you in
    da heart and moves your
    Soul and makes you yell..
    But da mental twist it
    place on my mind..
    hurts me.. heart drops
    cant catch….
    For ever kiss it’s a tear drop
    Black tears run from my
    eyes blood aint flowin
    but my soul cries of joy
    Maybe I am a fool
    fightin to live and love
    but the love is fadin
    and life seems like hell
    then it walks back in
    so how do I act..
    lonely nights
    the sun forgets to rise…
    but its my sunshine
    For ever kiss it’s a tear drop
    the mental twist it
    place on my mind..
    Hurts……. .. heart drops
    cant catch….but I been caught….
    the mental twist it
    place on my mind..
    Hurts……. ..but caught

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2003
     
  2. gempis

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    Maybe I am a fool
    fightin to live and love

    no, not a fool, sweet sister, not at all...........

    when we are babies, love is all there is. somewhere along the line as we grow, love gets twisted as people hurt us. you're not a fool, girl - you're just coming home. much love. :)
     
  3. Khasm13

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    love fade'n
    tired of wait'n
    for you to deciede
    if this is a permanant ride
    each time we get close
    you run and hide
    and slide off
    like a crackhead
    did you just hear what i said
    i said
    i don't think we are gonna make it
    i wanna make it
    but my heart can't take it
    da love/hate is shake'n
    my mind
    i gave you enough time
    to find
    where i was at
    but da problem was
    you neva step'd up to bat
    last night was
    the last 3 count on da mat

    tyte scribe...
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes...

    ..this perspective on the vagaries of love and loss..the piece reads very poignantly, the vernacular realistic and heartfelt...this peace resonates, fuh sho'...
     
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    Convoluted hole in the soul
    Heal and mend love's ways
    Baby girl, is hurting
    Butter up her days!

    much love ~
     
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    the sun forgets to rise…but its my sunshine.....
    MZANGEL>>>>>>>>>>>>IT's RICH....JUST RICHLY PUT.. :luvv:
     
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    MzAngel, you've done it again
    Tight work Lady!
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis your words touch me..and ya know..for the first time it feels good to be home..ur words wow thank you

    Khasm13 thanks fo da love on dis...wow :spin:

    alter..i am glad you like my flow..thanks

    1poetsought your so sweet thanks for your words...

    NastaRyder iiright then glad ya like it woooo

    Hiclass_female thanks fo showin love...

    ok ok :grouphug:
    much love fam...
    you all made me feel
    a betta with your comments ;)
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on this
    twist
    nice drop
    Peace
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Sister Blue means alot you stop by... :angel1:
     
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