Black Poetry : Mental trippin

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mental trippin
    Twisting to be of my own
    darkness within covers
    dams my soul and just takes hold
    merry treasures gone down
    for I now know I cant do it on
    my own….

    Flowing out of my realm
    Where no soul have been….
    Don’t feel like going on…
    Just want to go on home…
    For the peace in the valley
    Is no longer
    But I have to keep goin on…..

    As my sorrows pass
    they have got stronger and
    harder to over come
    as satan tries to stop me
    and claims my soul..but
    I keep moving on…
    Knowing I be ok….
    Keeping my faith
    And knowing I will
    Come out of this darkness

    See he wont place on you
    What you cant handle…


    A test of time….
    Temptation on ever mile
    as you walk that road
    Simple task of the
    Day building the stress of now
    Moving in to tomorrow
    Shadows follow me
    But I wont let it take my faith….

    So I just keep on keeping
    pushing through the pain
    and all the sorrows
    moving through my fears
    and wiping my tears.......

    blackangel thang....2004
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep it coming you have somthing special going on there

     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    mzblkangel

    No...never give in. :crying:

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one again speechless love it keep goin
     
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    Just at that point when you think you can't go on, God lets you know that you can. Emotive flow here, deeply written.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love and support
    likes the comments
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Very inspirational!
    Gotta keep pushing on through!
    Loved it!
     
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    we all may give in but never give up
    by faith will carry u out to light believe !!
    deep mental flowing da heart is weak
    yet da soul is stronger u will uncover to
    be in the valley of peace ....hold on
    tyte drop
     
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    yes

    Mba
    this was nice
    You turning out some wonderful perms sis ..lol.. :)
     
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    Have faith, my girl, and hang in there. I know of what ya speak, and I'm feelin this lovely poem.
     
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