Black Poetry : Mental Thoughts (up all night)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Up all night waving in thoughts
    from this thing my mind has brought

    under these twisted street
    surrounded by these inner beast

    finding myself in this cage
    fighting my way out such rage

    all i see is flashing lights
    sirens holla throughout da night

    another soul falls by da handz
    of another brotherly black man

    set on self black crime
    watching how we continue dying

    lil children cry " aloud "
    can't grow , nothing proud

    breakin news hit da screen
    sad stories da world brings

    shot down broken dreamz
    silent night , hallow screamz

    Up all night waving thoughts
    to da world my pen now shout

    stop !
    stop !

    Stop da beaten , breakin & killin
    put down da gunz if ya willin

    turn ya mind into a focus point
    before ya life end up in da joint

    Cage in rage from self blaze
    got my mental stuck in a maze
    where we now at center stage

    brothers & sisters STOP da hurt
    bond together let our abilities work

    Da future is now from within
    save da lives of our children
    so da night cries can finally end
    let's STOP da inner sin !

    Mental Thoughts up all night.
    :fyi:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great Flow Brother $$RICH$$
    Can't help but make you ponder
    What is going on?

    No end in sight, no shortage of fright
    Heading into another dark nght.

    Midwest city streaming
    Parents worried, hoping and dreaming
    The children screaming
    When will it ever stop?

    To solve this mess to end it soon
    The bullets will have to be controlled

    They find the shells
    Laying in the streets
    No wonder of the calibers shell

    If only it had a serial number
    Then will cease the bullet wonder!

    A candy bar can be traced to seller ( maker ) owner
    But the powers that be are afraid of the NRA and gun owners.

    It may be they have no desire to end it
    It serves a purpose of some to never end it

    The money flow stops
    The ambulance wheels rot
    Because they both come to an end

    Unless the populous stands up for having it
    Nothing changes in the scheme of things
    Until that happens the streets will run red
    Another night, another soul dead!

    FLOW on Brother $$RICH$$ it all gives the mind something to ponder.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afternoon Sir Richness...

    What's going on in the world is definitely enough to keep one up all night.

    Wouldn't it be great if we could simply write the world right? Anywho...



    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    HODEE
    There's no great plan
    when it comes to da man
    history shows us da fright
    while guns ring throughout da night
    taken down our sonz
    by da blast of another one
    hurt n' pain fill da air
    as da streets really don't care
    when will it ever stop
    or will hope lay down and rot
    killin just ring in my head
    every night when i go to bed
    up all night from the cries
    and da sad look in parents eyez
    maybe one day free will ring
    what i would change if i was king !

    Thankz brother for hearing me , world peace means so much to me .

    Sister Cocobutterskyn

    If we could write the world right
    we could set out sight
    into a direction so grand
    poeticly scribe it wit a plan
    change it into world peace
    so our children lives are release
    stop da cry of many souls
    that will help da young and old
    yes sis

    Thank you for hearing me on this
     
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    feelin'itsouldeep...

    we
    could write
    cures for diseases
    and thesis to save endanger
    species
    compose
    poems to end
    wars and bring peace
    to all regions
    we
    could script
    love in every heart
    to drown out sorrow and
    resurrect life
    if we could simply write the world right

    Thanks for inspiring me Sir Richness:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Sister to every line we could write hope
    to bring tis world out of such smoke
    give life a new meaning
    from da vibes our heart will be bringing
    as we sing wit pen and pad
    to canvas dat will make us nolonger sad
    stop da bleeding in our communities
    wit some inner and self unity
    love each and every neighbor
    understand beyond personal favor
    give our youth a chance to grow
    if we could write da world right
    what a beautiful and lovely sight
    if !

    up all night thinking mentally
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we
    could pen
    seeds in paragraphs
    to form chapters that grow wholesome books
    to educate
    we
    could write
    ancestral memoirs
    that reiterate the important need for
    a village to raise a child
    we
    could
    specify through scribe the role of wife
    and jot down in bold it’s the
    husband who’s head
    of house
    a
    wonderful
    world it would be
    if we could simply write the world right
     
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    We could bring forth something new
    in lyrics for the world dat's true
    show how family really should live
    the less pain in handling da bills
    scribe hope back into da home
    written words script in stone
    write da father's back into child life
    give mother's a husband she become wife
    stop all the homeless bliss
    kill da hunger dat breeds in our grace
    teach youth how to rize and trace
    place 2 place if only we could write freedom
    upon da worlds face
    yes it would be something else to write .

    How many handz would script a scribe
    add a line or a vibe , how many would
    join handz be one like a live band
    write to da world to make a stand
    wouldn't it be nice !!!
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, it would be VERY nice...

    especially if written by all the talented kind hearted poets of Destees!

    Thanks for the inspiration Sir Richness!:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Most welcome sister Cocobutterskyn and thank you for sharing with me making it complete
     
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