Black Poetry : Mental Seduction title given by Rich thanks Brother

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am mentally emplacing
    My erotic thoughts
    In your mind
    Wanting you to experience
    The essence of my seductive way
    Touching yourself
    Wishing that I would touch you
    All so gently and passionate
    Like mid-summer nights kiss
    No wonder I get lost
    With you on my thoughts
    It’s as if you
    Could read my thoughts
    How you seduce me
    With your mental vibrations
    I want to explore
    Every part of your essence
    Slowly using my mental conception
    Of your womanhood
    And how I want to
    tantalize your thoughts
    Your spirit and your seductive curves
    ****, I want you to touch me
    Caress your world
    With my manhood
    Wanting to give you
    Nothing more but
    Pure unadulterated sexual endeavors
    Just letting go
    like a tantric experience
    The question isn’t
    if you are willing
    the question is
    are you wanting
    to experience the
    ride of free love.

    Mannie
    Host and Poet of the Verbal High
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was deep mentally felt
    sound like a title calling for
    ( Mental Seduction ) or ( passion of the Mind )
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aint nothing like that mental thought of stimulation diggin the vibe....
     
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    Simple suggestion from a simple person I read it and I said to me Just
    "my desires" Simply because your passion was so deep
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the suggestions gonna keep it goung for a day before I make up my mind.
     
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    Great read, Brother.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite a sensually fluid piece brotha. How about, Mental Vibrations? Enjoyed the flow.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you all have some good ideas
     
  9. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got a title for it thanks to Rich

    Mental Seduction, I chose this because it is exactly that. Thanks brother for the help. Thanks to everyone else to.

    mannie
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome it's how it read to me happy to help
    most of all i love this piece..................................
     
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