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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UBNaturally, Jan 17, 2014.

  1. UBNaturally

    UBNaturally Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hoping the energy will be accepted here, not sure if this is too strong for placement....



    Didn't see it cumming, but it came, it saw, it concurred
    Concurred with the notion of having this foreign object inserted deep inside

    No defense, for it disguised itself in plain view, obvious to those who knew
    slowly entering without notice, slightly showing concentrated motives

    Acceptance was gradual, rejection was not casual, lest ye be a casualty
    Infiltration was not yet cumplete, total defeat, this was the objective
    The missionaries were selective

    Inserting the objects inside the weak, making the strong bow, should they speak
    The pain shows vivid on the face of the strong as they stand by,
    Powerless to respond to this obvious infiltration, inside they cry

    Cry for the weak to become strong,
    breaking free from bondage, held in missionary position too long

    As the cry becums louder from within, the weak begin, begin to observe
    Closing entrances, rebuffing further penetration
    angering the missionaries, bent on retaliation
    whereby taking from them their power

    Power to control the weak, but now the mind is no longer bound,
    for it has found a new power in a cry that made a freedom sound

    "NO MORE , NO MORE!"

    Solidarity was created, liberation was lore,
    from this bestiality of being treated as animals, color, the exemption,
    Missionaries now in terror, fearing redemption

    The Gods have become strong again, reclaiming their own
    Body and MIND, now leave it alone!


    Mental Bondage - Living "Free", Thinking "Submissive"
    The World Is Yours, But It Starts With Your Mind

    "I Think, Therefore I Think I Am, Therefore I Exist To Think, Therefore I Think Into Existence"


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    Believe me. There is much here much "stronger" than this piece, Brother. *smile*

    However, I do feel your passion in this. The word play/double entendre used enhances the powerful emotion of it.

    ..... The winding way your words convey the thought behind each word wrought.
     
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    Loving the feel of this poem. Lovely~UB Naturally. DS
     
  4. UBNaturally

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    Eye truly am appreciative of these words. This piece came at a time when I was dismayed at the hidden agendas that majority have fallen victim to. Still am, but have began a mission to discover why "WE" cannot "see" even when we are the possessors of the "Light".

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    Such an encouraging response, only inspires me to make sure that our words are not wasted, but used as tools to graft inter-dimensional visionary designs that connect us with our selves.

    "Word is Bond, INI, Fist Bump, Soulidarity"

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